Through the open door of the old country school, the lively sounds of a three piece band played on. Laughter and voices singing to the music. Small children lay asleep on benches around the room. Waltzes, polkas, old time schottische and swinging butterflies. Sashaying around the room with neighbours, friends and loved ones. Midnight lunch, a conglomerate of pot luck dishes on tables at the back of the room. The slowing chords and the crowd singing ‘Irene, Goodnight Irene’ announced the evening’s end. Across the grass covered field, was a chorus of “See you next time”. Goodbyes were few. |
Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Prompt - August 31, 2016 - write a story about goodbye.
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sharmishtha
9/7/2016 01:15:20 am
nostalgic piece!
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9/7/2016 09:00:45 am
Thank you. It's fun to close the eyes to bring back memories.
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Charli Mills
9/12/2016 11:02:59 pm
Though the music fades, it's never truly goodbye. This flash is both visual and heart-felt. Beautiful! It reminded me of the schoolhouse next door and the ghosts of memories that linger for the next inhabitant on Elmira Pond.
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9/14/2016 09:52:30 pm
The memories that slide into place at the sounds of old songs.
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